stargazing WIP ( all comments welcome :) )

[shaun rylands]

here is a quick idea i put together . needs a few tweaks and bells and whistles maybe ? . hope you can av a listen . let me know what you think , as im always open to ideas

https://soundcloud.com/rylo-3/stargazing-wip

shaun

[Ciberithm]

Overall, I think this will turn out to be a nice piece. I really like the melodic parts. I think the main textural element could use a little variance to keep things more interesting. The momentary drop in volume at 2:00 helped. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished version. I think it will definitely be on my favorites list.

[S1gnsOfL1fe]

Nice! Like Ciberithm said, a little more variation...but for a quick idea, this is gorgeous stuff. Definitely needs a mixdown but once that's sorted out, it'll be great.

Keep going!

Cheers,
-S1gns

[shaun rylands]

cheers guys , i really appreciate the feedback ;) thanks for listening in

shaun