My first works :D

[mbis444]

Hello, guys.
This is my works, it's some dark ambient, piano, darkwave elements.
If you can tell me about what your feeling and suggestions. I will appreciate it.
Thanks all.

:D

[RikkiSho]

I like the very occasional timing discrepancies in the piano notes. But I think you could do some more randomisation with the note velocities, for a bit more of an organic "played live" feel. The piano has a nice rich clarity to it, with the nice touch of reverb.

Lush strings. Very rich again.

Getting to the point at 6: with the heavily reverbed....vocal(?) noises? Getting a bit disturbed lol. Is someone being tortured? Now I am seeing the "dark" side of this piece.

[mbis444]

Thanks Rikki.
You're right....maybe I should change another piano VSTi.. :D

[RikkiSho]

No its not the sound of the piano. I just think the note velocities (volumes) could be more varied!

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