Hi,
Normally I don't ask for feedback but this track is driving me around in circles. It started out as a non vocal and non beat track. I wouldn't necessarily call it ambient but it certainly has a multitude of ambient elements. I am struggling to remove the beats and then a non planned vocal melody embedded itself and won't be removed either. Now I'm not sure what I have :frown:.
I like the layers and I love the discord and the build up. I know I need to fix the words, the levels and the timing.
I would really appreciate some opinions on what is working and what isn't. Please sock it to me as I can take it :cantlook:
I would appreciate it!!
Thanks,
https://soundcloud.com/skyhighdiamonds/dark-winter-sun
Normally I don't ask for feedback but this track is driving me around in circles. It started out as a non vocal and non beat track. I wouldn't necessarily call it ambient but it certainly has a multitude of ambient elements. I am struggling to remove the beats and then a non planned vocal melody embedded itself and won't be removed either. Now I'm not sure what I have :frown:.
I like the layers and I love the discord and the build up. I know I need to fix the words, the levels and the timing.
I would really appreciate some opinions on what is working and what isn't. Please sock it to me as I can take it :cantlook:
I would appreciate it!!
Thanks,
https://soundcloud.com/skyhighdiamonds/dark-winter-sun
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