Fog Parallax - Contemplation

[Chaz]

First off I'd like to thank you for taking the time to view this thread, it mean's a lot to me.
I have been writing ambient for about a year now and I am always looking to better myself. I have released a new song and would greatly appreciate input from this community who have much more experience than I do at composition. Any thoughts, recommendations and criticisms are welcomed.

This piece is from my upcoming album 'Leaving'

https://soundcloud.com/fogparallax/contemplation

Thank you very much for listening.

[aoVI]

Between this and "Emptiness" on your SC site, I think you are going to have a pretty good album.

[Chaz]

Thank you very much aoVI! I'm enjoying the process so far, working on my next song which is going to be a seamless transition from Contemplation.